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[quote]原帖由[b] [i]stat[/i][/b] 于 2009-3-12 09:29 发表 [url=http://www.yamibo.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=35398581&ptid=92457][img]http://www.yamibo.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
I am sorry I laughed from the very beginning to the very end. I remember you said this is not supposed to be a funny story... [/quote]
咦? 我忘了說...我每個故事的一開始都很輕鬆啊XD 雖然我也是現在才發現每一個故事的開始我都...
左義這個故事說不是歡樂向是因為中段有些劇情比較那個罷了,不過她的故事都偏向光明吧?
只是不像奏香那種單純在故意搞笑 (被冰封
而且左義的個性我感覺上可是正宗的表攻裡受百合子 (啥)
rated R++++......我汗,不至于吧,明明只是两个人玩poker,姬神输了想要赖账才逗深红玩呢OTL怎么会kids inappropriate
另外最后的一句flash是啥用法,晔?
So here comes the first story of living together happily ever after. Let's congratulate Ms. Magically-funny and Ms. Simple-minded!
Thanks for sharing the writing diary with us. It looks like a huge load of work... I think you did a good job on building up 笠原's personality, from crazy to sweet. I actually liked her at the end of the story.
As for 深紅's existence, I guess I have been looking at her as a person who tries to lay as low as possible, yet so low that you hardly can notice her. I guess this is something only she has--her unique personality.... Whatever, I don't really care about her.XD
--「深紅,請你只當我們是性格不合吧,好嗎?」她輕輕地說。
This line caught my eyes. Is the "we" here 秋菊 and 姬神? All right, don't say anything. This has brought up the value of my expectation for 秋菊 vs. 姬神 to a record high. Let's just keep it at that level.XD
>哪有黑化OTL
I swear it is rated R++++, totally kids inappropriate.XD Would you like to flash the link of your fiction?
傲嬌+口嫌身正直.......我不想吐槽了......另外,哪有黑化OTL寫的哪裡好OTL另外我是深度秋菊控人.....
另說,小深紅的感情線終於發展了啊啊啊,撒花,大撒花~
P.S.我的屬性?看我名字下面。
[quote]原帖由[b] [i]星野航[/i][/b] 于 2009-3-7 21:54 发表 [url=http://www.yamibo.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=35393074&ptid=92457][img]http://www.yamibo.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
我没有说中文吗??我记得我是中国人呀??yamiboqe026 [/quote]
誒,小航,我是說銀鐘的文不就貼在上面麼,感覺有點理解失衡.......
怎么會這樣?這是姬神,還有我是深紅,還有.....
「你不明白麼,我當時對笠原也說過‘只要不對深紅出手的話’這樣的話吧」姬神笑瞇瞇地說
雖然是笑著,可是卻感到冷氣卻沿著背脊蜿蜒而上,一股深深的惡寒涌到了四肢深處。
「就沒想過我的嘴唇,還是我的身體麼?」清冽的聲音響起的確是完全不符形象的話語「我的私產,你,和你的全部。」
只要一點點,再靠近一點點就什麽都可以得到。
就是這樣,溫潤的嘴唇,還有乳白的軀體。
密合在一起的觸感還有更進一步的慾望。
就是這樣,沉淪也好,什麽都好。
總之,就這樣了吧。
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這是下一步劇情腦補.......突然想起來隨便寫幾句
突發奇想果然是糟糕的XD
P.S.小航說的是啥......
[[i] 本帖最后由 暗色のAristoteles 于 2009-3-7 19:33 编辑 [/i]]
>3. 是說....你就這麼希望姬神和觀尾分手嗎XDDD
Have you ever seen a captain being with a dull seaman? It does not look right.XD
>1的感情線可能要到高二才會有長進...
深紅 has endured a miserable existence. Almost everyone has got a clear image so far, even the ones only showed up for one/two chapter, but 深紅,...
The older the wine the better it gets!? XDDD
H怎么會都是黑化嘛......
另外分手就分手吧
「呼呼,只要不對深紅出手的話,我也歡迎你任何時間內找我。包括和觀尾親熱的時候。」姬神笑瞇瞇地說
這明顯就是預告,預告!
How can 姬神 be so terrifying, even the mother nature can sense it? Is she the long missing boss of the Mafia clan in Japan? XDDD
So, how many people had 笠原 harassed for the past two years? She must be relatively attractive for it took her so long to accomplish the "command".XD
Actually, it would not be too bad if you make 深红 and 觀尾 together...
看完感言
哦~奏香线没喽,妳就老老实实看人家百吧......
深红的感情线明明就是没有一点点长进嘛......
秋菊又不在唉
观尾傻大妈形象是坐实了啊......
感言结束
另附一语
这文要H的话会不会蛮怪的......就青春好了XD
果然大家認為本篇還是不適合H的呢(笑),Galgame也不一定就是H吧,工畫堂和KID明明都沒有H的說.....另外完全贊同Really, the best fan service here is the interaction of the author and her readers. (applause)和the longer the better。
等以後有愛的時候再來原創區吧......我們等你哦(這話好囧)