Please excuse me for having been reading this with no response...
>一種很淡又揮不去的感情
This is exactly what I felt. Individual's feelings are being presented so naturally and sophisticatedly. The younger sister is the one who tells the story here, though it feels like everything she does is just to introduce what her sister is like. The older sister not only initiated the "space exchange"(?) but also made herself the center of the story without even being there.
Can I say this story is all about diaries? XD The younger sister got to know her older sister by reading the diaries. But could you really learn a person through pure text? Partially I guess. The story very well concluded with the appearance of the latest two diaries--at least reassured the younger sister it's all real...XD
In any case, even though you claimed the images of the characters are not clear which I think they are, and the setting and the background are lame which I think they are fine, I do think it has delivered the idea of the inborn connection between sisters. Most importantly, 靜嵐 and 念曉 would live happily ever after...(without the third wheel XD)
Please excuse me for having been reading this with no response...
>一種很淡又揮不去的感情
This is exactly what I felt. Individual's feelings are being presented so naturally and sophisticatedly. The younger sister is the one who tells the story here, though it feels like everything she does is just to introduce what her sister is like. The older sister not only initiated the "space exchange"(?) but also made herself the center of the story without even being there.
Can I say this story is all about diaries? XD The younger sister got to know her older sister by reading the diaries. But could you really learn a person through pure text? Partially I guess. The story very well concluded with the appearance of the latest two diaries--at least reassured the younger sister it's all real...XD
In any case, even though you claimed the images of the characters are not clear which I think they are, and the setting and the background are lame which I think they are fine, I do think it has delivered the idea of the inborn connection between sisters. Most importantly, 靜嵐 and 念曉 would live happily ever after...(without the third wheel XD)
Please excuse me for having been reading this with no response...
>一種很淡又揮不去的感情
This is exactly what I felt. Individual's feelings are being presented so naturally and sophisticatedly. The younger sister is the one who tells the story here, though it feels like everything she does is just to introduce what her sister is like. The older sister not only initiated the "space exchange"(?) but also made herself the center of the story without even being there.
Can I say this story is all about diaries? XD The younger sister got to know her older sister by reading the diaries. But could you really learn a person through pure text? Partially I guess. The story very well concluded with the appearance of the latest two diaries--at least reassured the younger sister it's all real...XD
In any case, even though you claimed the images of the characters are not clear which I think they are, and the setting and the background are lame which I think they are fine, I do think it has delivered the idea of the inborn connection between sisters. Most importantly, 靜嵐 and 念曉 would live happily ever after...(without the third wheel XD)
我也很喜歡鐘靜嵐耶XDD
感覺就像是鐘同學暗戀姐姐然後姐姐深愛著妹妹可是妹妹是天然呆(才沒有)
覺得這次姐姐的個性像菊羅,天不在乎地不關注心中唯一有的只有自己的雙胞胎
而妹妹跟竹理有點像又有些不像,
雖然同樣都有點遲鈍(喂),但覺得思喬和念曉的相像度比竹理跟菊羅像的多的多
所謂雙胞胎的型態就是這樣吧 w
不過,最後思喬對念曉的感情轉換的確是有點快,
感覺中間應該還要再插一章進來 XD(被轟殺)
還有一個節奏有些快的就是鐘靜嵐衝擊性(?)的告白
......感覺應該要再勁爆一點這樣w(喂喂喂)
啊,好像太囉嗦了些XD
不論如何,桃大的這篇文很精彩,
雖然沒有壯麗的煙火但感覺就像夏夜的仙女棒
還有或許是遲鈍的關係,這篇文在下怎麼看都是治癒系的...orz
新作期待ing XD
我也很喜歡鐘靜嵐耶XDD
感覺就像是鐘同學暗戀姐姐然後姐姐深愛著妹妹可是妹妹是天然呆(才沒有)
覺得這次姐姐的個性像菊羅,天不在乎地不關注心中唯一有的只有自己的雙胞胎
而妹妹跟竹理有點像又有些不像,
雖然同樣都有點遲鈍(喂),但覺得思喬和念曉的相像度比竹理跟菊羅像的多的多
所謂雙胞胎的型態就是這樣吧 w
不過,最後思喬對念曉的感情轉換的確是有點快,
感覺中間應該還要再插一章進來 XD(被轟殺)
還有一個節奏有些快的就是鐘靜嵐衝擊性(?)的告白
......感覺應該要再勁爆一點這樣w(喂喂喂)
啊,好像太囉嗦了些XD
不論如何,桃大的這篇文很精彩,
雖然沒有壯麗的煙火但感覺就像夏夜的仙女棒
還有或許是遲鈍的關係,這篇文在下怎麼看都是治癒系的...orz
新作期待ing XD
我也很喜歡鐘靜嵐耶XDD
感覺就像是鐘同學暗戀姐姐然後姐姐深愛著妹妹可是妹妹是天然呆(才沒有)
覺得這次姐姐的個性像菊羅,天不在乎地不關注心中唯一有的只有自己的雙胞胎
而妹妹跟竹理有點像又有些不像,
雖然同樣都有點遲鈍(喂),但覺得思喬和念曉的相像度比竹理跟菊羅像的多的多
所謂雙胞胎的型態就是這樣吧 w
不過,最後思喬對念曉的感情轉換的確是有點快,
感覺中間應該還要再插一章進來 XD(被轟殺)
還有一個節奏有些快的就是鐘靜嵐衝擊性(?)的告白
......感覺應該要再勁爆一點這樣w(喂喂喂)
啊,好像太囉嗦了些XD
不論如何,桃大的這篇文很精彩,
雖然沒有壯麗的煙火但感覺就像夏夜的仙女棒
還有或許是遲鈍的關係,這篇文在下怎麼看都是治癒系的...orz
新作期待ing XD
亲爱的,你应该奖励我,因为这次我没有转成简体,而是用繁体看完了这两章哦~~嘿嘿~
我果然还是比较喜欢思乔~
我发现思乔和竹理都是比较活泼可爱开朗型的少女,为什么这种类型的女性角色我就塑造不来?!!拍桌<---个人问题……
看亲爱的文很治愈啊!!我超喜欢的~希望下次还有这样的治愈系少女……
或说这对姐妹为什么让我想起了牛郎织女- -|||下次见面不知道又要到什么时候了……
为什么钟静岚、父母两个世界都存在,只有她们两个不能见容于同一个世界,好虐……莫非她们两个其实是一个人么……
让她们继续用短信超越时空吧……>______<
话说我很想要姐妹啊!!可惜是独生女= =
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亲爱的,你应该奖励我,因为这次我没有转成简体,而是用繁体看完了这两章哦~~嘿嘿~
我果然还是比较喜欢思乔~
我发现思乔和竹理都是比较活泼可爱开朗型的少女,为什么这种类型的女性角色我就塑造不来?!!拍桌<---个人问题……
看亲爱的文很治愈啊!!我超喜欢的~希望下次还有这样的治愈系少女……
或说这对姐妹为什么让我想起了牛郎织女- -|||下次见面不知道又要到什么时候了……
为什么钟静岚、父母两个世界都存在,只有她们两个不能见容于同一个世界,好虐……莫非她们两个其实是一个人么……
让她们继续用短信超越时空吧……>______<
话说我很想要姐妹啊!!可惜是独生女= =
[[i] 本帖最后由 冰山来客 于 2009-5-11 10:17 编辑 [/i]]
亲爱的,你应该奖励我,因为这次我没有转成简体,而是用繁体看完了这两章哦~~嘿嘿~
我果然还是比较喜欢思乔~
我发现思乔和竹理都是比较活泼可爱开朗型的少女,为什么这种类型的女性角色我就塑造不来?!!拍桌<---个人问题……
看亲爱的文很治愈啊!!我超喜欢的~希望下次还有这样的治愈系少女……
或说这对姐妹为什么让我想起了牛郎织女- -|||下次见面不知道又要到什么时候了……
为什么钟静岚、父母两个世界都存在,只有她们两个不能见容于同一个世界,好虐……莫非她们两个其实是一个人么……
让她们继续用短信超越时空吧……>______<
话说我很想要姐妹啊!!可惜是独生女= =
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[quote]原帖由[b] [i]me[/i][/b] 于 2009-5-3 20:04 发表 [url=http://www.yamibo.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=35473049&ptid=97218][img]http://www.yamibo.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
哦 其实顾问也算御姐 她的成名技是咬吉他(迷)
随便到街上拔…要是拔到泰国特产会不会导致一些神奇的效果?
哦 其实**也…(被拖走)
我认为念晓会面无表情的把老鼠尾巴塞进某作者的衣服后领 [/quote]
噴 為什麼聽起來那麼詭異!
如果拔到泰國特產會連結到不同的世界喔! 神奇吧!
哪個作者? 冰山來客? (裝傻被殺
[quote]原帖由[b] [i]null[/i][/b] 于 2009-5-4 03:13 发表 [url=http://www.yamibo.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=35473692&ptid=97218][img]http://www.yamibo.com/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
很好奇曹念曉為什麼會主動結識鍾靜嵐yamiboqe026
念曉回來了, 那思喬怎樣回去呢, 那邊又沒人懂怎樣"接"她 [/quote]
兩姊妹都對鍾靜嵐有興趣 但曹思喬沒有踏出主動那一步 曹念曉則直接跳上人家的腳踏車!
思喬會迷路!! (驚恐