哦？那是不是回的越多写的越快yamibohk05

……果然有趣yamiboqe030 ，更新也很快么

[[i] 本帖最后由 新人类 于 2007-1-6 23:16 编辑 [/i]]

哦？那是不是回的越多写的越快yamibohk05

……果然有趣yamiboqe030 ，更新也很快么

[[i] 本帖最后由 新人类 于 2007-1-6 23:16 编辑 [/i]]

哦？那是不是回的越多写的越快yamibohk05

……果然有趣yamiboqe030 ，更新也很快么

[[i] 本帖最后由 新人类 于 2007-1-6 23:16 编辑 [/i]]

哦？那是不是回的越多写的越快yamibohk05

……果然有趣yamiboqe030 ，更新也很快么

[[i] 本帖最后由 新人类 于 2007-1-6 23:16 编辑 [/i]]

恶～～＂西瓜｜｜＂？？？yamiboqe012

恶～～＂西瓜｜｜＂？？？yamiboqe012

恶～～＂西瓜｜｜＂？？？yamiboqe012

恶～～＂西瓜｜｜＂？？？yamiboqe012

我说..楼主呀(拍肩)
你还是乖乖的写下去吧
再发个两三篇看看读者的反应吧
不要只发一篇就退缩了yamiboqe031
我相信你后面的故事会越来越精彩
加油嘿

我说..楼主呀(拍肩)
你还是乖乖的写下去吧
再发个两三篇看看读者的反应吧
不要只发一篇就退缩了yamiboqe031
我相信你后面的故事会越来越精彩
加油嘿

我说..楼主呀(拍肩)
你还是乖乖的写下去吧
再发个两三篇看看读者的反应吧
不要只发一篇就退缩了yamiboqe031
我相信你后面的故事会越来越精彩
加油嘿

我说..楼主呀(拍肩)
你还是乖乖的写下去吧
再发个两三篇看看读者的反应吧
不要只发一篇就退缩了yamiboqe031
我相信你后面的故事会越来越精彩
加油嘿

Support new writer!!
Please don't be lazy, like to read your story in complete! yamiboshiho
ps. need some editing, please break up the paragraphs abit more.
Better with more spacing in between lines. ^_^

Support new writer!!
Please don't be lazy, like to read your story in complete! yamiboshiho
ps. need some editing, please break up the paragraphs abit more.
Better with more spacing in between lines. ^_^

Support new writer!!
Please don't be lazy, like to read your story in complete! yamiboshiho
ps. need some editing, please break up the paragraphs abit more.
Better with more spacing in between lines. ^_^

Support new writer!!
Please don't be lazy, like to read your story in complete! yamiboshiho
ps. need some editing, please break up the paragraphs abit more.
Better with more spacing in between lines. ^_^

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不好意思，话没说完，本人脸皮较薄，每次发完见不到3个回帖的话就不好意思再发了，不过，本人对自己文笔还是蛮自信的yamibohk05

[[i] 本帖最后由 西瓜ll 于 2007-1-6 17:53 编辑 [/i]]